*Leafstar padded out of her den. She instantly saw the daylight warriors outside, huddled in a group, discussing something. She walked over to them and Frecklewish turned to her.*
Leafstar
Can we all talk to you in your den?
Frecklewish
*She nodded and signaled with her tail for them to follow her. Once they reached her den, she sat down and invited them to talk.*
Leafstar
Well, you see, we've been talking and have decided that we should become full warriors of SkyClan. It's a hassle on everyone and we agreed that clan life suits us better then life as a kittypet.
Ebonyclaw
Yeah, even though the twoleg food is really good!
Snookthorn
*He gave a quick glare at the young warrior.*
Yes, we'll even take on real warrior names.
Billystorm
*She listened intently, then walked out of her den.*
Leafstar
Wait! Where are you going?
Harveymoon
*She purred and looked at them over her shoulder.*
Well, you ready to become full warriors of SkyClan?
Leafstar
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So from now on, they will be know as Burningstorm, Emberclaw, Hookedtail, Whitemoon, and Badgerfang.
Leafstar
*The cats all looked proud of their new names, especially Badgerfang, happy with his fiercsom name, but Burningstorm was the most happy and he invited Leafstar to hunt with him.*
Burningstorm
----
*She purred at one on Burningstorm's jokes and nuzzled his shoulder.*
Leafstar
*He looked down at her and smiled, then licked his lipps.*
That was some rabbit, wasn't it?
Burningstorm
Yeah.
*She thought about the small, juicy rabbit that they had caught together. Then, she gave her chest fur a few embarresed licks.*
You know, Burningstorm, I really like you.
Leafstar
I hope so.
*He licked her ear, then they both watched as the first stars of Silverpelt appeared.*
Burningstorm
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awsum!!!! :)
ReplyDeletemaybe you could do with some drama... like some other cat likes leafstar or Burningstorm...
That's what it's all about .. check out the chapters and click on "New Story."
ReplyDeleteI like it. But at the end of the book, Frecklepaw is still an apprentice. And there's not that much wrong with the name "Freckle".
ReplyDeleteAnd, I don't know who is who. I never knew that Burningstorm was Billystorm until you contined. I still don't know the other cats.
Sorry, forgot to add that. I kept Frecklewish as Frecklewish. In the short manga, she was a medicine cat apprentice with the name Frecklewish. I'm making an allegiances soon.
ReplyDeleteBTW, Badgerfang is Macgyver. Harveymoon is Whitemoon. Burningstorm is Billystorm. Snookthorn left as you know. Ebonyclaw is Emberclaw. Frecklewish stayed the same.
ReplyDeleteOh. kk. :) And ya, I saw that in the short story thing.
ReplyDeleteI looooove it
ReplyDeleteO.O Burningstorm isn't a warrior in SkyClan!
ReplyDelete*mutters* mouse-brain. Guess you can't be an author one day. Even if you write the book!! And also... the "book" sucks! And what if Erin Hunter sees it!!! She would SUE you and blogger would ban you!